February 26, 2017

Homework Help: Grammar Check Ms. Sue

Posted by Unknown on Tuesday, October 13, 2009 at 6:03pm.

Can you please see what I wrote is in formal language and the grammar is correct.Thank you.

In Ellen's relationships all she wants to do get ahead. Ellen fails so miserably with love because the world moves so quickly that she does not have time to stop and think about what is going on. She keeps her mask on completely because she gives up life with Jimmy so she could be with George and become rich. The modern world lacked compassion and consumed Ellen into that person who did not show any emotion. There was no reason for Ellen to be happy because she she drowned in all of her problems.

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