I am working on a paragraph and I need help on my introduction.
Hi, I'm Lisa, and I love to play sports such as volleyball, and soccer. One sport I don't like is hockey, because I it doesn't really interest me.
oh can someone please translate this into french for me, thank you, Just give me some french words.
to love = aimer mieux
to play sports - jouer aux sports
Now, do what you can and repost for proofreading. We HELP after you DO the work. There are many good French--->English/English --->French dictionaries online. Just ask, if you need them.
Sra (aka Mme)
thanks, but I am unable to find a good french/english dictionary online.
To help improve your introduction, let's first focus on making it more engaging and concise. Here's a revised version:
"Hello there! I'm Lisa, a sports enthusiast passionate about volleyball and soccer. Although there are numerous sports out there, hockey hasn't managed to capture my interest. Allow me to share some insights on why this fascinating sport hasn't quite won me over."
By providing a brief overview of your favorite sports and mentioning that hockey isn't one you enjoy, you've captured the reader's attention. Remember to keep it concise and focused on setting the context for your paragraph.