Posted by Austin on Monday, September 28, 2009 at 9:17pm.
a lot is two words
You didn't finish the last sentence.
Other than those two mistakes -- you did a good job! :-)
The school Board trustees of Vavenby have come to a decision where they want to close down The Elementary school of Vavenby, and try to maintain their budget. The board is closing the school because the mill shut down and people are moving away. Though there are a lot of others who disagree with this, and one of them is Carol Schaffer. She said that she hopes that around 100 people show up at the meeting. They are disagreeing with this because they think that this decsion will cripple the community. The school board trustees are hoping to close down the school down...
Ms. Sue could you please help me with the last sentence, and thanks a lot for your help. Without you this would have been impossible:-)
Also could you please fix this sentence: school Board trustees of Vavenby have come to a decision where they want to close down The Elementary school of Vavenby.
Its not bad but, It seems wierd because I don't like it when it repeats Vavenby 2 times.
Go back to the article and find out when they plan to shut down the school. Was it 2010 at the latest??
Vavenby School Board trustees have decided to close their elementary school.
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