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December 20, 2014

Homework Help: Help Please! (URGENT)

Posted by John on Sunday, September 20, 2009 at 2:54am.

My previous post didn't post properly so heres a new one.

Can someone please check my work?

James:But weíre so good together,

Susan:We were good together. Iím sorry, but I think we should break up.

James:(Silence)

Susan:James?

James:You think we should break up. (Sighs) I understand your feelings for me have changed. I guess Iím going to have to accept the fact that you donít want to be with me anymore, so I guessÖ.we break up.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Awkward Silence<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Jason:(Suddenly walks over) Whatís up?

Jason:Looks at James and Susan as they remain silent) Something wrong?

James:We broke up.

Jason:OhÖÖ. (Silence)

Jason:Well, no worries. (Puts his arms around them and pulls them close) Donít let a messy relationship mess up our friendship. We will always be friends. Hey, why donít the three of us catch a movie tonight? (James and Susan smile.)

The is the ending part of my assertive communication script. And I find that the ending doesn't sound realistic.

Can someone suggest any ideas on how I can make this more realistic?

Thank You.

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