Posted by John on Sunday, September 20, 2009 at 2:54am.
My previous post didn't post properly so heres a new one.
Can someone please check my work?
James:But weíre so good together,
Susan:We were good together. Iím sorry, but I think we should break up.
James:You think we should break up. (Sighs) I understand your feelings for me have changed. I guess Iím going to have to accept the fact that you donít want to be with me anymore, so I guessÖ.we break up.
Jason:(Suddenly walks over) Whatís up?
Jason:Looks at James and Susan as they remain silent) Something wrong?
James:We broke up.
Jason:Well, no worries. (Puts his arms around them and pulls them close) Donít let a messy relationship mess up our friendship. We will always be friends. Hey, why donít the three of us catch a movie tonight? (James and Susan smile.)
The is the ending part of my assertive communication script. And I find that the ending doesn't sound realistic.
Can someone suggest any ideas on how I can make this more realistic?
- Help Please! (URGENT) - GuruBlue, Sunday, September 20, 2009 at 8:43am
I think James might tell Jason that he's busy and walks off. Then Susan might just smile, grab Jason's arm and says something like, I'd love to, then bat her eyelashes at him....
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