it is my summary I just need it to be revised
It did not copy/paste. You will need to type it in. We will be happy to make corrections or suggestions.
Here was your original post.
It looks pretty good -- but I can't tell for sure since I don't know what was in the original.
Arizona has become a principal area
where drugs are smuggled into the United States from Mexico, largely because the state is sparsely populated and infrequently patrolled. Smuggling leads to violence and the introduction of dangerous, illegal substances into America and must be monitored better for the safety of US citizens. Poly-drug organizations smuggling drugs into the United States through Arizona are creating a growing problem, and law enforcement needs to step up and block these dangerous ports of entry.
My only comment is often we in the United States do wonders with our words, we make new ones up.
Is Poly-drug a word? What is wrong with just saying " Organizations smuggling drugs..."