How would you re-write the following email so that it follow the critical thinking rules?

I don’t have a lot of time to explain but off the top of my head answer is as a reader critical thinking affects me all ways. Not just reading but writing too. Sometimes what I read I must write about later like this discussion question so clearly I have to read. Clear writing is the hardest thing in the world.

Though I don’t the average writer has to write business rapports which can build report and be inter personal. In critical writing, writers construct sentences with clear intentions.

Business people write fast because the business people I know are always in a hurry.

Business reading is reports, memos and articles. My aunt is a university professor and she writes articles for journals. She is smart and a better writer than my uncle who is a businessman. So critical writers are better than business writers. But critical writing like argumentative essays have structure, so business writing has structure too. It’s not a matter of one kind of writing being harder than the other it’s that the structure is harder.

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How would you re-write the following email so that it follow the critical thinking rules?

I also don't see the email you're supposed to correct.

Subject: The Impact of Critical Thinking on Reading and Writing

Dear [Recipient],

I hope this email finds you well. I would like to discuss the influence of critical thinking on both reading and writing, highlighting how it impacts us as readers and writers.

Firstly, critical thinking not only affects our ability to comprehend written material but also influences our writing skills. As readers, we often come across texts that we need to analyze and later write about, just like this discussion question. Therefore, the ability to critically read and understand the material is essential.

Moreover, clear writing can be extremely challenging. Writing in a concise and coherent manner requires critical thinking skills, as writers must construct sentences with clear intentions. This aspect is particularly relevant in business writing, where reports, memos, and articles are common. While business people tend to write quickly due to time constraints, it is important to recognize that critical thinking plays an important role in producing effective business communication.

In comparing critical writing to business writing, one might assume that critical writers are superior. However, this assumption overlooks the fact that both forms of writing require structure. While critical writing, such as argumentative essays, emphasizes the importance of structured arguments, business writing also necessitates a clear and organized structure for effective communication. Therefore, it is not a matter of one form of writing being inherently more challenging than the other, but rather acknowledging that the structure itself can pose difficulties for writers.

In conclusion, critical thinking profoundly impacts our reading and writing abilities. Adopting a critical thinking approach allows us to better comprehend written material, write with clarity and intentionality, and structure our arguments effectively. By recognizing the importance of critical thinking in both reading and writing, we can enhance our overall communication skills.

Thank you for your attention.

Best regards,

[Your Name]