Homework Help Forum: Literature- Antigone dialogue

Posted by Theresa on Sunday, September 6, 2009 at 2:04pm.

This is my alternate ending to Antigone please feel free to comment on it, and give me a letter grade. I'm in 10th grade. Does it sound good so far I'll post the other half as soon as you comment Antigone: I deserve to die Polynecies meant everything to me He was my blood and a part of my family Now because of my disobedient Uncle We are now truly separated forever and ever... No!! I will take this lasso and hang myself! Soon Polyneices you and I will be together again! Haemon: Antigone my love! Antigone are you in there? Is that you? Antigone: Haemon! Is that your voice? The voice of angels The voice of life and love If it is you please show your face! Haemon: Antigone where are you? I can only hear your soft And comforting voice But I don't see your beautiful face! (The two join together and hug) Antigone: O' Haemon It has been too long Since I last felt your soft touch But now since we have joined together, We must part. Haemon: What do you mean Antigone You don't love me? Antigone: No! I love you so much! Haemon you are the light of my life And the apple of my eye But the only individual That is separating us is Polyneices I love him too, which is why I am going to hang myself! Haemon: Antigone I know you loved your brother But now me must live on And look toward our future. Antigone: Now without my brother, Haemon My brother guded me through life, Through my pain, and suffering Through my sorrow, and grief And I taught him the difference Between right and wrong We've been through everything together And without him I feel empty. Haemon: Antigone, I love you And I want what's best for you If you want to make this choice Then you may. (Messenger enters inside the cave) Messenger: Antigone! Haemon! Are you in here? Antigone and Haemon: Yes messenger Is there a problem? Messenger: Apparently, Yes Eurydice has just been found dead In her chamber The hand that killed her was Creon Creon is an extremely brutal man, Always has been But he has gone too far with killing His own wife! Antigone: O' Haemon what are we going to do? Haemon: Murder my father of all brutal men He has made my life hell; But we are going to make his life worse! Messenger: Haemon, Don't do anything that will cause, You, your life! Haemon: If I must die; I will die as a fighter If I live; I will live as a hero.

• Literature- Antigone dialogue - Justina, Sunday, September 6, 2009 at 2:08pm

  Very nice and I could visualize everything you said I would give you either a B+ or an A

  
  

• Literature- Antigone dialogue - Theresa, Sunday, September 6, 2009 at 2:09pm

  Thank you Justina I really appreciate it.

  
  

• Literature- Antigone dialogue - GuruBlue, Sunday, September 6, 2009 at 2:31pm

  We are now truly separated forever and ever... No!! ( Leave out the "now" in this sentence) Now without my brother, Haemon ( Do you mean "not" here instead of "now") This sounds very good! I would definitely give you an A so far.

  
  

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