Homework Help: English

Posted by John on Monday, August 24, 2009 at 12:12am.

Color of Our Friendship

Friendship is full of colors.
Red is action.
It makes us feel active.
Yellow is happiness.
It makes us feel happy.
Gray is age.
It keeps us living harmonously together.
Friendship is full of colors.

(It is a poem I made. Would you check the poem and correct the errors, please?)

English - SraJMcGin, Monday, August 24, 2009 at 1:10am
No errors there either! :)

Sra
English - Writeacher, Monday, August 24, 2009 at 8:03am
Spelling -- "harmoniously" (missing "i")

I like your poem -- very nice!!

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