Posted by cindy on Tuesday, August 11, 2009 at 9:31pm.
yes but i would rather use commas instead of semicolons anyway it is a good sentence.
The semicolons are wrong. Check this site for the correct use of semicolons.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/607/04/
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