February 21, 2017

Homework Help: Communication

Posted by Bernice Smith on Sunday, July 19, 2009 at 8:22am.

"I wanted to welcome you ASAP to our little family here in the States. It's high time we shook hands in person and not just across the sea. I'm pleased as punch about getting to know you all, and I for one will do my level best to sell you on America."
How do you correct this and what is wrong with it.

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