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Posted by y912f on Thursday, July 16, 2009 at 10:20am.

for my research paper on Diet and Diabetes, i have to think of a thesis statement

thesis: Diet and Diabetes are two things that go side by side and highly impact each other

is that ok. i don't think it's detailed enough. it's mostly my opinion, and not really an argument. can someone pleeeease help me improve my thesis statemnt, this way i'll also have an idea of what to argue in my paper.
thanks

n&w - Marth, Thursday, July 16, 2009 at 10:46am
You should state how Diet and Diabetes impact each other. Stating that they impact each other is very broad.

For example, you could write something along the lines of "diet controls the onset of diabetes."
n&w - y912f, Thursday, July 16, 2009 at 10:59am
...ok i will try my best to think of something more narrow.
thanks for your help though

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