In society today, some families don't have essential needs of financial stability, attention of their parents, and a comfortable household to grow up in a stable environment which lead to a dangerous future ahead. Comparing to that and our own vision of a model of an American family, we feel incompetent.
Can someone help me out if this is an good thesis statement?
Justin, read this site. It will answer your question and explain how you can improve your thesis statement.
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