Homework Help: writing

Posted by Justin on Wednesday, June 24, 2009 at 6:29pm.

In society today, some families don't have essential needs of financial stability, attention of their parents, and a comfortable household to grow up in a stable environment which lead to a dangerous future ahead. Comparing to that and our own vision of a model of an American family, we feel incompetent.

Can someone help me out if this is an good thesis statement?

writing - GuruBlue, Wednesday, June 24, 2009 at 7:19pm
Justin, read this site. It will answer your question and explain how you can improve your thesis statement.

Then if you have another question, please repost.

http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/thesis_statement.shtml#strongthesis

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