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Homework Help: Editing of Yr 6 exposition

Posted by Perplexepenny,O on Monday, June 22, 2009 at 7:05am.

One of te most common issues that as been endlessly open to debate is relative to ..... "junkfood". Banned of unlimited is the question that I have prepared to discuss in this short easy article including its pros and cons. Whether the sale of junkfood should be legal to a child under the age of twelve conditionally in presence of an accompanying adult. Te topic is currently conferencing between the members of the local community campaiging to prevent this from happening.

Help
1.can show the mistakes I did
2. markout of 45
3.your comment
4.tips on this topic and type of text
5.What level do I write at
6.What is my weakest point

P.s I'm an asian girl my teachers say I write excellenly but with an overflow of vocabulary I'm trying to make it much simpler.Thanks to those who help me espiecially

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