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Homework Help: french

Posted by stacey on Thursday, June 18, 2009 at 3:41pm.

can someone read my story that knows french well? can you please check it for mistakes. Here is the english and french version of it.
Jean Paul n'a pas aimé partager ses choses. Par exemple, un jour il est allé à la plage. Il a apporté trois pelles, cinq seaux et deux parapluies. Sally lui a demandé si elle pourrait emprunter une pelle parce qu'elle n'avait pas celui. Jean Paul a dit "NON!" de façon impolie et Sally a commencé à pleurer. Jean Paul n'a pas même joué avec ses pelles, ou ses seaux à la plage. la mère de Jean Paul lui a dite : "Il faut que tu parteges les choses avec d'autres gens!" Jean Paul a aussi aimé faire des excuses. Il a dit à sa mère "je lui aurais donné une pelle si elle m'a demandé avec plus de douceur!" Elle a répondu : "Tu partgeais tes choses quand tu étais petit! Si vous n'êtes pas agréables, personne ne vous aimera!"
Le jour suivant, Jean Paul est allée au parc sur sa nouvelle bicyclette. Il a vu une fille qui avait cinq cônes de glace! Il lui a demandé de lui donner un cône de glace! Elle lui a expliqué qu'elle lui donnerait un cône de glace s'il lui a permis de monter sa bicyclette pendant qu'il a mangé de la glace. Il a dit "Non! Je ne vous permettrai pas de monter ma bicyclette!" Elle a répondu : "alors, vous ne pouvez pas avoir un cône de glace!" Jean Paul est allée à la maison pour crier à sa mère.
Alors, Il a expliqué ce qui avait passé au parc. Sa mère lui a expliqué que si vous voulez que d'autres partagent leurs choses avec vous, vous devez partager quelque chose avec eux. Il a pensé à que sa mère a dit. Alors, il est retourné au parc. Il a vu la même fille avec ses cônes de glace. Il lui permet de prendre un trajet sur sa bicyclette et elle lui a donné son cône de glace.

Il lui a dit "je crois que je serai plus agréable et partagerai mes choses avec chacun, même s'ils n'échangent pas de moi n'importe quoi!"

Jean Paul did not like to share his things. For example, one day he went to the beach. He brought three shovels, five buckets, and two umbrellas. Sally asked him for a shovel because she did not have one. Jean Paul said "NO!" rudely and sally began to cry. Jean Paul did not even play with his shovels, or his buckets at the beach Jean Paul's mother said to him: "It is necessary for you share with other people! " Jean Paul also liked to make excuses. He said to his mother "I would have given her a shovel if she asked me with more sweetness!" She replied: “You used to share with others when you were young! If you are not nice, nobody will like you!"

The next day, Jean Paul rode to the park on his new bike. He saw a girl who had five ice cream cones! He asked her to give him an ice cream cone! She explained to him that she would give him an ice cream cone if he allowed her to ride his bike while he ate the ice cream. He said "No! I will not let you ride my bike!" She replied: "Then, you cannot have an ice cream cone!" Jean Paul went home to cry to his mother.

Then, He explained what had happened at the park. His mother explained to him that if you want others to share their things with you, you have to share something with them. He thought about what his mother said. Then, he went back to the park. He saw the same girl with her ice cream cones. He let her take a ride on his bike and she gave him her ice cream cone.

He said to her "I think I will be nicer and share my things with everyone, even if they do not trade me anything!"

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