Is this a good topic sentence? If not can someone help me? These great explores received a lot of achievements and honors in American History Thomas Paine, Thomas Jefferson, Benjamin Franklin, and Olaudah Equaino. They all tough us the meaning of American Literature and the goals and challenges they set throughout their life.
1. You've posted two sentences. Which is your topic sentence?
2. The people you listed were not explorers.
3. Do you mean "taught" not "tough?"
4. They did not teach us the meaning of American literature.
What is your assignment? Please explain, and we'll be glad to help you write a topic sentence.
To write a topic to and discuss the challenges of the eighteenth century about the of names i gave aleady?
The topic sentence you provided is close, but it could use some revision for clarity and coherence. You can try rephrasing it as follows:
"These great explorers of American history, including Thomas Paine, Thomas Jefferson, Benjamin Franklin, and Olaudah Equiano, achieved numerous honors and accomplishments, and through their works, they not only enlightened us about the essence of American literature but also exemplified the aspirations and obstacles they faced throughout their lives."
To create an effective topic sentence, it is important to introduce the main idea or theme of the paragraph concisely, while also ensuring proper sentence structure and grammar. The revised sentence attempts to achieve this by addressing the achievements and contributions of notable explorers in American history and highlighting their impact on American literature.