Posted by ELINA on Friday, June 12, 2009 at 8:14pm.
If I have added some nonimportant things in it then please do take them out
You don't want to make it any shorter. You have covered Luther's main achievements. Now, please proofread it to correct the misspellings and typos.
oh sorry i'm just a bad typer not a bad speller
I hope you wouldn't turn in a paper with these typos. Your paper shouldn't start with
"that he was the first one . . ."
Be sure to put Luther's full name somewhere in the first sentence.
okay but overall is it gud?
You have the important information, but I can't say it's good until I see your final paragraph -- the way you plan to turn it in to your teacher.
Luther was the first one to begin the reformation. He drew a list of arguements against church practises and nailed them to the door of the church in German city of Wittenberg. The list which became known as Luther's Ninety-five Theses, was copied printed & distributed throughout Europe.
Yay! You've done a very good job!!
Only a few minor corrections:
Reformation should be capitalized.
arguments (spelling)
the German . . .
and (not &)
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