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the achievevment I have outlined for Luther is : that he was the !st one to begin a reformation. He drew list of arguements against church practises and nailed them to door of church in German city of Wittenberg. The list which became known as Luther's Ninety-five Theses, was copied printed & distributed throughout Europe.


Again If u can try to make this shorter than please do and I f u believe I have missed something important out, then please do add to it. Thanx

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    If I have added some nonimportant things in it then please do take them out

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    You don't want to make it any shorter. You have covered Luther's main achievements. Now, please proofread it to correct the misspellings and typos.

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    oh sorry i'm just a bad typer not a bad speller

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    I hope you wouldn't turn in a paper with these typos. Your paper shouldn't start with
    "that he was the first one . . ."

    Be sure to put Luther's full name somewhere in the first sentence.

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    okay but overall is it gud?

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    You have the important information, but I can't say it's good until I see your final paragraph -- the way you plan to turn it in to your teacher.

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    Luther was the first one to begin the reformation. He drew a list of arguements against church practises and nailed them to the door of the church in German city of Wittenberg. The list which became known as Luther's Ninety-five Theses, was copied printed & distributed throughout Europe.

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    Yay! You've done a very good job!!

    Only a few minor corrections:

    Reformation should be capitalized.

    arguments (spelling)

    the German . . .

    and (not &)

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