Homework Help Forum: SOCIAL STUDIES

Posted by ELINA on Friday, June 12, 2009 at 8:14pm.

the achievevment I have outlined for Luther is : that he was the !st one to begin a reformation. He drew list of arguements against church practises and nailed them to door of church in German city of Wittenberg. The list which became known as Luther's Ninety-five Theses, was copied printed & distributed throughout Europe. Again If u can try to make this shorter than please do and I f u believe I have missed something important out, then please do add to it. Thanx

• SOCIAL STUDIES - ELINA, Friday, June 12, 2009 at 8:17pm

  If I have added some nonimportant things in it then please do take them out

  
  

• SOCIAL STUDIES - Ms. Sue, Friday, June 12, 2009 at 8:30pm

  You don't want to make it any shorter. You have covered Luther's main achievements. Now, please proofread it to correct the misspellings and typos.

  
  

• SOCIAL STUDIES - ELINA, Friday, June 12, 2009 at 8:43pm

  oh sorry i'm just a bad typer not a bad speller

  
  

• SOCIAL STUDIES - Ms. Sue, Friday, June 12, 2009 at 8:48pm

  I hope you wouldn't turn in a paper with these typos. Your paper shouldn't start with "that he was the first one . . ." Be sure to put Luther's full name somewhere in the first sentence.

  
  

• SOCIAL STUDIES - ELINA, Friday, June 12, 2009 at 9:00pm

  okay but overall is it gud?

  
  

• SOCIAL STUDIES - Ms. Sue, Friday, June 12, 2009 at 9:03pm

  You have the important information, but I can't say it's good until I see your final paragraph -- the way you plan to turn it in to your teacher.

  
  

• SOCIAL STUDIES - ELINA, Friday, June 12, 2009 at 10:20pm

  Luther was the first one to begin the reformation. He drew a list of arguements against church practises and nailed them to the door of the church in German city of Wittenberg. The list which became known as Luther's Ninety-five Theses, was copied printed & distributed throughout Europe.

  
  

• SOCIAL STUDIES - Ms. Sue, Friday, June 12, 2009 at 10:36pm

  Yay! You've done a very good job!! Only a few minor corrections: Reformation should be capitalized. arguments (spelling) the German . . . and (not &)

  
  

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