Write a letter in Spanish in which you describe something that happened to you which required consulting a nurse, doctor or dentist. Include in your description:

why you needed a particular medical service
where you went to get it and what happened when you arrived
how you feel now after some time has passed
what will happen, or not happen, as a result of this experience

Dear friend,
A few months ago my teeth started hurting a lot. I went to the dentist's office to get them checked. When I arrived, the dentist told me that they were very crooked. He said he was going to give me some shots, and then put braces on them. After everything was done I felt sick. But now I'm fine and my teeth don't hurt. Until I have my braces I can't eat much sweets. But once the time is up, I have to go back to the dentist and get them off.

can someone tell me if this paragraph is ok. then i will try to start writing it in spanish

No comma after shots. Put a comma after everything was done.

While I have my braces,I can't eat many sweets.... would be better.

When my teeth are finally straight, I will go back to the dentist to get them off.

Dear friend,

Yes, the paragraph you have written is okay. Now, let's work on translating it into Spanish.

Estimado amigo,
Hace unos meses, empecé a sentir mucho dolor en los dientes. Fui a la consulta del dentista para que los revisara. Cuando llegué, el dentista me dijo que estaban muy torcidos. Me dijo que iba a darme unas inyecciones y luego ponerme frenillos. Después de todo, me sentí mal. Pero ahora estoy bien y mis dientes ya no duelen. Hasta que me quiten los frenillos, no puedo comer muchos dulces. Pero una vez que termine ese tiempo, tendré que volver al dentista y que me los retiren.

Now, you can use this translated paragraph as a starting point to write your letter in Spanish.