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1. We shouted good expressions together with the sash around the upperbody at the beach.

2. I learned how to use ropes when we go down a cliff in a mountain.

3. We got together and learned new songs accoring to the guitar sound of the leader.

4. We cleaned the beach by picking up cans, garbage, etc.

5. I learned how to give CPR to a bleathless person to wake him up.

6. I learned how to give first aid to save the life.

7. I learned how to use ropes to climb a cliff.

(Would you like to check the sentences above? Thank you.)

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    1. We shouted good expressions together with the sash around the upperbody at the beach.
    I don't understand this one at all, sorry! Are you trying to describe a celebration in a costume on a beach?

    2. I learned how to use ropes when we go down a cliff in a mountain.
    This is fine; you can also write, "I learned how to use ropes and rappel down the mountain."
    http://www.answers.com/rappel


    3. We got together and learned new songs accoring to the guitar sound of the leader.
    Corrected: We got together and learned new songs while the leader played his guitar.

    4. We cleaned the beach by picking up cans, garbage, etc.
    Good!

    5. I learned how to give CPR to a bleathless person to wake him up.
    Corrected: I learned how to give CPR and bring a person back to life.

    6. I learned how to give first aid to save the life.
    A little correction: I learned how to give first aid and save someone's life.

    7. I learned how to use ropes to climb a cliff.
    Good!!

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