is this a good thesis statement
Although Juliet’s suitors Paris and Romeo are very similar on the outside, their thoughts and feelings are very different.
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Thanks.here is the whole introduction. do you think is good? if not, wht do i need to work on.
Although Juliet’s suitors Paris and Romeo are very similar on the outside, their thoughts and feelings are very different. Throughout “Romeo and Juliet” they are often compared. Romeo and Paris have differences as well as similarities. The most important difference is the way and the reason of their love for Juliet. This essay will discuss both the similarities and differences of these young guys.
The third sentence is out of character with the rest of the paragraph, it really does not add much. I would delete it, and reword the next sentence.
In the last sentence "guys" seems to me a bit informal..almost slang.
Yes, the thesis statement you provided is solid. It presents a clear argument that distinguishes between the characters of Paris and Romeo by highlighting their contrasting thoughts and feelings, despite their similarities in appearance. This thesis statement indicates that your essay will analyze and compare the inner qualities of these two characters, thereby allowing readers to gain a deeper understanding of their individual perspectives.
To create a good thesis statement, you should consider the following:
1. Clearly state your argument or claim.
2. Provide a brief overview of the main points you will discuss in your essay.
3. Make sure the thesis statement is specific and focused.
In your thesis statement, you have accomplished these key elements by addressing the similarities and differences between Paris and Romeo's external and internal qualities. Well done!