I have to write an essay (1000 words) on Niezsche (explain the phrase 'God is dead'). So far I have nearly 600 words. I am struggling with it though now.
Here is what I have written:
Friedrich Nietzsche was a German philosopher of the 19th century. He wrote many critical texts on (for example) religion, science and philosophy written in a very distinctive German style. Much of Nietzsche's work remains controversial today and debated about (as a result of the significance, interpretation and also style of his writing). Perhaps one of Nietzsche's more well-known philosophical ideas is that on religion, with his famous statement 'God is dead'.
'God is dead' first appeared in Nietzsche's work, The Science (section 108). It later appears in section 125 (The Madman) and also in section 343. The phrase is also found in 'Thus Spoke Zarathrustra' which familiarized the phrase with many. The idea is stated in 'The Madman' as follows: “God is dead. God remains dead. And we have killed him”. The phrase seems to be a persistent theme (not only by Nietzsche but re-articulated by others – William Hamilton, Thomas Altizier – as well), and which shocks many, engendering (also) numerous interpretations.
To understand the phrase 'God is dead' one must ask numerous questions such as why did he say it? What was the outcome of the statement? These are just a couple of questions that could be asked.
So, why did Nietzsche say this? What were the causes of this statement? Friedrich Nietzsche was brought up very religiously. Both his grandparents had been ordained into the Lutheran Church, and his father was, also, a minister. Nietzsche was raised by women (after the death of his father and brother) and this took affected him. During Nietzsche's childhood, he also suffered poor health which continued through to adulthood. For Nietzsche, religion was important. He was born into a family of religious aspects and the more religious members died (which, as I have said, affected him). There are many reasons as to why Nietzsche said 'God is dead' (considering his family) and which try to explain the phenomenon such as secularization, the will to power and scepticism.
Secularization refers to the transformation by which society moves from a close relationship with religious institutions to a much more separated one (or the modernization of a society and the lessening dependence on religion).
Now, what happened after he stated the phrase? What were the consequences of it? Nietzsche didn't think God was literally dead (that he existed and then died in a literal sense), he meant that God was dead in modern society – killed by rationalism and science.
His statement lead to many theories and thoughts on certain aspects such as nihilism, perspectivism (truth is dead) and eternal return.
Finally, what does the phrase mean in our society? And compared to Nietzsche's time? What did the phrase mean in other times as well? Nowadays, compared to (much) earlier times, religion is not considered so highly or seen to be so recognizable. Religion is no longer recognized by humans (as it had been in the Middle Ages. In earlier times, the church had more power and more control; it could possibly sometimes be classified as abusive (with its power).
In conclusion, Nietzsche was a great philosopher. When Nietzsche said 'God is dead' he was in a way saying that God is no longer relevant. Throughout the centuries, God has become less and less recognized. No one could have known the impact of one small phrase and how complicated and deep it would become. The phrase challenges people everywhere to look further and be more open to the possibilities of the phrase.
It's not very strong (bad), with little detail so far. Please read through and say anything about it. I really need help so thanks for any help given.
Yes, with little detail. It's those details and examples you need to add.
Make sure that each of your internal paragraphs (all except the intro and concl) has between 6 and 8 or 9 sentences. Believe me, in an academic paper, that is not too many if you expect to fully explain your topic sentence. And each internal paragraph's topic sentence needs to directly support your thesis statement.
So ...
What is your thesis statement?
List your topic sentences.
Then re-post.
There are just a few suggestions I have. I found it to be a very interesting paper, and it was well-written overall.
~Maybe explain more why he thought God was dead. Was there a specific situation that proved this to him, rather than just modern society in general? Was there someone he met or something he read?
~I would elaborate on nihilism and eternal return. I have not researched this topic, and I do not know what these terms mean. Even though your teacher knows, explaining will add depth to your essay.
~Maybe explain some people that Nietzsche inspired, or how people took his idea and elaborated on it, or how it evolved. Teachers like it usually when you explain how a figure influenced society in the future.
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Overall, your essay is off to a good start, but it lacks some necessary depth and analysis. Here are a few suggestions to help you improve:
1. Introduction: You could provide more context on Nietzsche's significance as a philosopher and why his ideas are still debated today. Introduce the concept of the phrase "God is dead" as a central theme in Nietzsche's work and explain why it is important to understand its meaning.
2. Analyzing the phrase: Instead of just asking questions, try to answer them and provide detailed explanations. For example, you mentioned that Nietzsche's upbringing in a religious family and his personal experiences influenced his statement. Elaborate on these factors and explain how they shaped his perspective on religion.
3. Discussing the consequences: You briefly touched on the consequences of Nietzsche's statement, such as nihilism and perspectivism, but you should provide more analysis and examples to support these ideas. How did his statement challenge the existing values and belief systems of his time? How did it affect subsequent philosophical and intellectual movements?
4. Exploring the phrase's meaning: You started discussing the phrase's meaning in our society compared to Nietzsche's time, but you could expand on this further. Discuss the decline of religious influence in modern society, the rise of secularism, and the evolving understanding of faith and spirituality. Consider including contrasting perspectives and examples to strengthen your argument.
5. Conclusion: Your conclusion is concise, but it could be more impactful. Summarize the key points you discussed in your essay and emphasize why understanding Nietzsche's phrase is significant in today's society.
Additionally, consider incorporating more specific examples, quotes, and references from Nietzsche's works to support your arguments and demonstrate a deeper engagement with his ideas.
Remember, when writing an essay, it is important to provide evidence and analysis to support your claims. Take your time to research and gather relevant information to strengthen your arguments. Good luck with your essay!