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March 29, 2015

Homework Help: French (URGENT)

Posted by Larry on Friday, May 29, 2009 at 1:57am.

@ Sra, here is the short story with the corrections you suggested in my previous post.

Petit lapin n’était pas heureux comment il était. Il a voulu ressembler les autres animaux. Quand il a vu Mr. Bushy Tail, l’écureuil, il a voulu une queue qui ressemblait les écureuils. Ensuite il a vu Mr. Porcupine et il a voulu les piquants. Ensuite il est passé Mrs. Puddle-Duck et il a voulu des caoutchoucs rouges comme elle. Sage Mr. Groundhog l’a envoyé à l’arbre aux souhaits. Il a vu un petit oiseau rouge et a voulu des ailes rouges pendant qu’il a tourné (around) trois fois. Il a laissé pousser des ailes rouges. Sa mère, Mr. Bushy Tail, et Mrs. Puddle-duck ne le reconnaissent pas lui et ils ne le laissaient pas entrer. Sage Mr. Groundhog l’a laissé coucher avec lui, mais lapin était triste. Le prochaine jour il est retourné encore à l’arbre aux souhaits et l’a voulu ne pas avoir les ailes. Il est allé chez lui et sa mère l’a reconnu et il était heureux et jamais a voulu etre quelqu’un d’autre sauf lui-meme.

If there are anymore errros, please feel free to correct me.

Note: I didn't understand how to rewrite this part.

Il a vu un petit oiseau rouge et a voulu des ailes rouges pendant qu’il a tourné (around) trois fois.

Here was your suggestion
turned around = il s'est retourné or tourné

Merci Beaucoup!!!

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