Okay, for an assignment, I have to do a rewrite of the "Alouette" song. It must include 4 verses.
Here it is: the theme is "pie"
(First line)
(Second line)
Nous mangons tarte de pomme
Nous mangons tarte de pomme
Yay pour pomme - Yay pour pomme
Mange la tarte - Mange la tarte
Yummmm
*Chorus*
Nous mangons tarte de fraise
Nous mangons tarte de fraise
Yay pour fraise - Yay pour fraise
Mange la tarte - Mange la tarte
Yummmmm
*Chorus*
Nous mangons tarte de peche
Nous mangons tarte de peche
yay pour peche - Yay pour peche
Mange la tarte - Mange la tarte
Yummmm
*Chorus*
Nous mangons tarte de poire
Nous mangons tarte de poire
Yay pour poire - Yay pour poire
Mange la tarte - Mange la tarte
Yay pour tarte - Yay pour tarte
Yummmmm
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Problem is, I don't know what to write for the first 2 lines. Please help.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Here is the original song:
Alouette, gentille Alouette
Alouette je te plumerai
Alouette, gentille Alouette
Alouette je te plumerai
Je te plumerai la tête
Je te plumerai la tête
Et la tête, et la tête
Alouette, Alouette
O-o-o-o-oh
Alouette, gentille Alouette
Alouette je te plumerai
Alouette, gentille Alouette
Alouette je te plumerai
Alouette, gentille Alouette
Alouette je te plumerai
Je te plumerai le nez
Je te plumerai le nez
Et le nez, et le nez
Alouette, Alouette
O-o-o-o-oh
Alouette, gentille Alouette
Alouette je te plumerai
Alouette, gentille Alouette
Alouette je te plumerai
Alouette, gentille Alouette
Alouette je te plumerai
Je te plumerai les yeux
Je te plumerai les yeux
Et les yeux, et les yeux
Alouette, Alouette
O-o-o-o-oh......
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Please check for grammar and any other errors. And please help me with the first 2 lines!!!
Merci Beaucoup!@!@
Nous mangons = to keep the soft "g" as in manger, in front of o, a you must add an "e" = Nous mangeons...
"yum yum" = miam miam
hourras could substitute for "Yay..."
Don't forget to correct every time you use (mangeons, miam miam, hourras)
peche = pêche
No need to write the words of "Alouette" as I know it well! We always sang it in Montréal with dreadful pronunciation - just for fun at parties!
The first 2 lines - you mean where the song begins? You might try this?
Cette tarte, délicieuse tarte
Je te mangerai.....
Sra (aka Mme)
To help you with the first two lines, let's think of some words related to pie. Since the theme is "pie," we can start with the word "pie" itself.
Here's a suggestion for the first two lines:
(First line) Pie délicieux, Pie délicieux
(Second line) Nous aimons manger pie, nous aimons manger pie
With these lines, you are introducing the theme of pie and expressing your love for eating pie. You can modify these lines if you have a particular type of pie in mind or any specific word you want to use.
Regarding grammar and errors, I noticed a few things in your provided verses:
1. "Tarte de pomme" and "tarte de fraise" should have an article before the noun. It should be "la tarte de pomme" and "la tarte de fraise" since you are referring to a specific pie.
2. In the chorus, "Yay pour fraise" should be "Vive la fraise" or "Hourra pour la fraise" to convey excitement or celebration for strawberries.
3. In the fourth verse, "Yay pour tarte" could be replaced with "Vive la tarte" or "Hourra pour la tarte" to maintain consistency with the previous verses.
Overall, there are no major grammar errors, but these tweaks can improve the flow and cohesion of your song. Good luck with your assignment!