hi - thanks again for all of your help.
I wrote the paragraph first as you suggested in English - I haev translated most of it can you edit nad give me any suggestions
My twin faternal brothers were born at Riverside Hospital in COlumbus, Ohio. One twin has black hair and blue eyes the other has blond hair and green eyes. Veintinueve de marzo en dos mil. Estuve sprendida y confudida. Pedi a ver los bebes. Vi a os bebes y estaban muy lindos. Estuve esperabdo en el hospital y alguien me regalo una camisa que decia “Ahora soy la hermana grade.” Estuve con mi familia. Tenia seis anos de edad.
I NEVER suggested you write it first in English! What I said was to write it just in Spanish, using the grammar and vocabulary you have mastered BUT to provide the English where you were not sure how to say something.
I'm not correcting this one because I did the one where you said "use this one."
Sra
Great job on the translation! Here's the edited version of your paragraph with some suggestions:
"My fraternal twin brothers were born at Riverside Hospital in Columbus, Ohio. One twin has black hair and blue eyes, while the other has blond hair and green eyes. Fue el veintinueve de marzo del dos mil. Estaba sorprendida y confundida. Le pedí ver a los bebés. Los vi y estaban muy lindos. Estuve esperando en el hospital y alguien me regaló una camisa que decía 'Ahora soy la hermana mayor'. Estaba con mi familia. Tenía seis años de edad."
I made a few changes based on the context and grammar rules in Spanish. Please let me know if you have any further questions or if there's anything else I can assist you with!