spanish sra jmcguin
posted by sam .
my younger twin faternal brothers weer born at Riversside Hospital in Columbus Ohio. One has blond hair and green eyes and the other one has black hair and blue eyes. Veintinueve de marzo en dos mil. Estuve sprendida y confudida. Pedi a ver los bebes. Vi a os bebes y estaban muy lindos. Estuve esperabdo en el hospital y alguien me regalo una camisa que decia “Ahora soy la hermana grade.” Estuve con mi familia. Tenia seis anos de edad.
Hi - Again thanks for your help. I have to write a paragraph about my life etc. I wrote it in English first and I have translated most of it into Spanish can you please review this and make any comments.
Could you write the whole thing in English so I can help you translate it better. The answer I gave you could be better but I need to see the English version.
Please go with the latest correction, where I corrected Lauren's because hers was closer to what you need.