Posted by jerson on Thursday, May 14, 2009 at 8:23pm.
That's not quite a thesis statement. It's a statement, but not a thesis.
In a thesis statement, you need to have not only a factual topic, but also your opinion or position or stance about that topic.
Study the poor and re-done thesis statements on this webpage, and then repost when you have yours rewritten.
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
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