posted by y912f on .
There are many electrical appliances in my house. There are light bulbs in every room. But they need to be repaired because they don't turn on. There is an oven and a dishwhasher in the back of the kithchen. There is a fan in my bedroom, but i don't turn it on much because i like to save electricity. In the laundry room there is a washing machine that needs to be replaced because it doesn't work.
this is what i have now (so far)
Allí hay muchos aparatos eléctricos en mi casa. Hay un bombillo en cada cuarto. Pero hay que reparar los porque no encienden. Hay una el horno y una lavaplatos al fondo de la cocina. Hay un ventilador en mi dormitorio, pero yo no encienden (encender?) porque me gusta ahorrar la electricidad.
reparar los = 1 word = repararlos
If you say "hay una el horno" you say "there is one the oven" = Hay un horno y un lavaplatos en la cocina. I do not believe you really want to say "in the back" because it's behind the kitchen! SIMPLIFY always.
Do you really believe "yo" and "encienden" match? Encienden is for ellos/ustedes and enciendo is for yo.
OK, it looks like you just have the last sentence to go!