Posted by John on Friday, May 8, 2009 at 8:08pm.
The following sentences have been revised. Check out the [brackets].
"I'd like to talk about yeot, a Korean traditional sweet. People like to give yeot to students who are going to take an entrance examination. They want the students [to] enter the universities that they want. When you eat yeot, [you] will find that it is sticky. So eating yeo[t] can be campared with entering the university by passing the entrance examination. The students can be members of the universities and cannot be separated from the universities like a sticky yeot in the mouth."
The only other correction I see that needs to be made is the spelling of "compared."
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