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Homework Help Forum: spanish

Posted by y912f on Tuesday, May 5, 2009 at 6:16pm.

please revise my spanish part, make corrections, and add accent where needed:

In the morning I wake up at 8:30 a.m. The first thing I do is brush my teeth and comb my hair. Then i eat breakfast. By 9:00 a.m., I start my schooling (home). The first thing I work on is trigonometry. Then I do English, American History, Physics, Arts, and Spanish. My classes are very difficult and I don't like them. At 12:00 I go to school to teach other homeschooling kids. At 4:00 p.m. my brother and I go out to play tennis. I eat dinner at 7:00 p.m. Then i go on my computer and talk to my friends on the phone. My family goes to bed at 10:00 p.m.

spanish:
Por la mañana yo me despierto a als ocho y media. Primero me cepillo los dientes y el pelo. Luego como el desayuno. Primero trabajo en trígonometria. Luego preparo el inglés, la historia americana, la físicam, las artes y el español. mis clases son muy difícil, y no me gusta. A las doce voy a la escuela para eseñar a otros niños que aprenden en casa. A las cuatro mi hermano y yo salir jugar tenis. Yo como la cena a las siete de la noche. yo acostarse la computadora y habla el teléfono. mi familia acostarse la cama a las dies de la noche.

(i think i forgot the line: by 9 i start my homeschooling....i don't know how to say that)

thanks

  • spanish - SraJMcGin, Tuesday, May 5, 2009 at 8:57pm

    a little typo here = a als ocho y media. = a las ocho...

    trígonometria. = requires an accent mark = trigonometría

    fisicam? Physics is la física

    mis clases son muy difícil, = Capitalize the first letter of the first word in a sentence = Mis and be sure to catch EVERY adjective = difíciles

    I do not like THEM will be: THEY are not pleasing to me = no me gustan

    para eseñar = spelling error = enseñar

    mi hermano y yo salir jugar tenis. = You must conjugate the verb to match the subject = mi hermano y yo salimos a jugar al tenis

    yo acostarse = then I to bed the computer??? Luego trabajo en mi computadora y hablo con mis amigos por teléfono

    mi familia acostarse la cama a las dies = 3 errors here: mi familia se acuesta a las diez (conjugate verb, drop la cama because acostarse means "to go to bed" and spell 10 correctly)

    Por las nueve, empiezo mi tarea...By 9 I begin my homework. Always SIMPLIFY if you can!

    Sra

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