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Homework Help: French

Posted by Larry on Tuesday, May 5, 2009 at 2:25am.

Can someone please proofread my paragraph?

Je m'appelle Larry. J'ai quatorze ans et j’habite à Vernon, BC au Canada. *Là* où je habite, au printemps il fait beau et en été il fait chaud. Mais à l'automne il fait plus frais et en hiver il fait froid.
À propos de moi, je suis grand et intelligent mais je suis timide.
J'aime utiliser mon ordinateur, écouter de la musique et me détendre. J'aime manger de la pizza mais je n'aime pas les bananes. Finalement, j'aime jouer au basketball et au football juste pour le plaisir. Et toi? Dis-moi de vous.

-Au revoir

NOte: I don't get this part (*Là* où je habite,) It's Henri's correction from my previous post. How would you say, "where I live, au printemps...."

If there are any errors please correct me.

Merci Beaucoup!!

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