Posted by Larry on Monday, May 4, 2009 at 2:12am.
Je m'appelle Larry. J'ai quatorze ans et je habite (dans)*à* Vernon, BC au Canada. *Là* où je habite, au printemps il fait beau(.)*et* en été il fait chaud. Mais (en)*à l'automne* (autumne) il fait *plus* frais(.)*et* (Aussi) en hiver il fait froid.
À propos de moi, je suis grand et intelligent(e)(.) (M)mais je suis timide.
J'aime utiliser mon ordinateur, (écoute)*écouter* de la musique et (se)*me* détendre. J'aime manger *de* la pizza mais je n'aime pas (manger) *les* bananas. Finalement, j'aime jouer au basketball et au (foot)*football* *juste pour le plaisir* (how would you say 'for fun').
Note: ()= remove or correct spelling
**= replace with this word or ponctuation...
Bonne chance :-)
Oops,missed one:J'ai quatorze ans et (je)*j'*+habite=j'habite
You could also have said: *je demeure*
twice for "J'habite" There is a trend to simply say "J'habite Vernon"
bananas = bananes
for fun could be "to have fun" = pour m'amuser
To be sure you caught all Henri's corrections, if you have time, feel free to repost for final proofreading.
Sra (aka Mme)
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