February 27, 2017

Homework Help: English

Posted by Lena on Sunday, May 3, 2009 at 2:09pm.

My teacher said I need a transition sentance from my introductory paragraph to my body paragraph. I'm not too sure how to do that exactly. My last sentance of my introductory paragraph is; "The play, The Merchant of Venice by William Shakespeare as well as the film, Oh Brother Where Art Thou? by Joel and Ethan Coen clearly displays how Antonio and Ulysses, the heroes, love for another person, gullibility and vanity eventually bring forth their downfalls. " and the beginning of my body paragraph is; "When the hero falls in love with another person, he loses all sense of logic and probability which in turn bring's forth the hero's downfall." I thought the two paragraphs tied in well together but apparently not. Could someone please help me out? Thanks :)

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