I like vegetable soup. It is good for digestion. The following are the ingredients: two carrots, one radish, five mushrooms, many leeks, and two egplants.
1. First, wash the plants cleanly. You have to get rid of chemicals, so prepare a big bowl of water and add one tens of the water to the bowl. Put the ingredients in the bowl for more than 30 minutes. After that wash them cleanly.
2. Next, slice the ingredients, and put them into the big container.
3. Heat the plants in the container and boil them.
4. Then, add seasons. Add sesemes and hot pepper paste powders to the vegetable soup.
5. Boil them again on the gas stove for 10 minutes.
6. After cooling the vegetable soup a little, you can enjoy tasty vegetable soup.
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I like vegetable soup. It is good for digestion. The following are the ingredients: two carrots, one radish, five mushrooms, many leeks, and two eggplants.
1. First, wash the plants clean. You have to get rid of chemicals, so prepare a big bowl of water and add one tens of the water<~~what are you adding to the bowl of water? not more water, I think, right? to the bowl. Put the ingredients in the bowl for more than 30 minutes. After that wash them clean.
2. Next, slice the ingredients,<~~delete comma and put them into the big container.
3. Heat the plants in the container and boil them.
4. Then,<~~delete comma add seasoning. Add sesame seeds and hot pepper paste powders to the vegetable soup.
5. Boil them again on the gas stove for 10 minutes.
6. After cooling the vegetable soup a little, you can enjoy tasty vegetable soup.
The rest looks great!!
The passage contains a few grammar errors and can be improved for clarity. Here is the revised version:
"I like vegetable soup because it is good for digestion. Here are the ingredients for the soup: two carrots, one radish, five mushrooms, several leeks, and two eggplants.
To prepare the soup, follow these steps:
1. Start by thoroughly washing the vegetables to remove any chemicals. Fill a big bowl with water and add around ten parts water to one part vinegar. Soak the ingredients in this water-vinegar mixture for at least 30 minutes. After that, rinse them properly to ensure they are clean.
2. Next, thinly slice all the ingredients and place them into a large cooking pot or container.
3. Heat the vegetables in the pot and bring them to a boil.
4. Once the vegetables are cooked, add seasoning to enhance the flavor of the soup. You can use sesame seeds and hot pepper paste powders as seasonings.
5. Allow the soup to simmer on the gas stove for an additional 10 minutes.
6. After the vegetable soup has cooled slightly, it will be ready to enjoy.
By following these steps, you can prepare a delicious and nutritious vegetable soup."
In this revised version, the grammar has been corrected, and the instructions have been clarified for better understanding.