Posted by Larry on Friday, April 24, 2009 at 2:22am.
1. d'Alberta and remove "dans" = il habite Vernon
3. You omitted "a" = a frère cadet = a un frère cadet
4. James aimes à = wrong verb ending and the preposition is not required = James aime...
6. (It would be easier to keep track of where I am if each set had a number!) James aimes manger la pizza et œuf. = James aime manger....et les oeufs
7. possessive plus plural = Les matières favories de James sont les maths, les sciences et les études sociales. (OR whatever your textbook uses for Social Studes)
8. est de son pére = clearer to say "c'est celui de son père (accent grave, not aigu)... then it's a command = Fais tout à ta meilleure capacité.
Sra (aka Mme)
8. James aimerait être programmeur. OR entrepreneur du logiciel (OR de la programmerie)
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