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Describe the reactions of Juliet's father and mother when Pais proposes marriage to their daughter. How are their opinions the same and how are they different?

Essay:
Lord Capulet, and Lady Capulet had the same reactions to Paris's proposal to Juliet. Lord Capulet becomes overjoyed of the proposal because he believes Paris is the perfect man for his daughter. Lady Capulet also becomes delighted with the idea of Paris marrying Juliet becasue she thinks he's handsome, and he's rich. The difference is Lord Capulet thinks Juliet is too young to wed, while Lady Capulet believes she's mature and old enough. But despite all the controversy between Lord and Lady Capulet's decision with their daughter, Paris and Juliet don't get married after all.

*** Could you Please grade my essay I'm in 9th grade and we have to write 5 sentences.***

This is a paragraph, not an essay, but that's OK if that's what your assignment is.

Delete extra commas, such as after "Lord Capulet" in the first sentence.

Make all the verb tenses the same -- all past or all present. Don't mix them up in your paragraph. ("had" in the first sentence; "becomes" in the second sentence; etc.)

Use a spell-checker.

Get rid of any redundancies (such as "But" and "despite" right next to each other -- choose one; delete the other).

Lord Capulet and Lady Capulet showed the same reactions to Paris's proposal to Juliet. Lord Capulet became overjoyed of the proposal because he believed Paris was the perfect man for his daughter. Lady Capulet also becomes delighted with the idea of Paris marrying Juliet because she thinks he's handsome and rich. The difference is Lord Capulet thinks Juliet is too young to wed, while Lady Capulet believes she's mature and old enough. Despite all the controversy between Lord and Lady Capulet's decision with their daughter Paris and Juliet don't get married after all.

*** Could you please grade this I'm in 9th grade and I fixed the corrections.

this is crap its not an essay!!!!!!

The last sentence needs reworking; the first part of it doesn't make sense. In addition, there needs to be a comma before Paris.

The first two verbs are in past tense, but all the rest are in present tense. How will you correct this?

Comma after "daughter" in the last sentence.

Sure, I'm happy to grade your essay! Here's what I think:

Grade: B-

Comments: Your essay provides a clear description of Lord Capulet's and Lady Capulet's reactions to Paris's proposal. You accurately state that they both become delighted with the idea, but you could have provided more specific evidence from the text to support this. Your explanation of the difference between their opinions could have been more developed and supported with examples. Additionally, the conclusion could have been stronger by providing more context or explaining the reasons why Paris and Juliet don't get married. Overall, good effort for a 9th-grade essay!

As an AI bot, I cannot physically grade your essay. However, I can provide feedback and suggestions for improvement. In terms of content, you have accurately described the reactions of Lord Capulet and Lady Capulet when Paris proposes to Juliet. Additionally, you have identified their shared opinions (being delighted with the proposal) and their differences (Lord Capulet considering Juliet too young while Lady Capulet believing she is mature enough). However, there are a few areas where you can enhance your essay:

1. Provide more specific evidence from the text to support your claims. For example, you can include quotes or references to specific scenes to demonstrate Lord Capulet's and Lady Capulet's reactions.

2. Add analysis to explain why they have these reactions. Why does Lord Capulet see Paris as the perfect man for his daughter? Why does Lady Capulet think Juliet is old enough to marry? Developing these points will make your essay more comprehensive.

3. Expand on the controversy between Lord Capulet and Lady Capulet's decision. Are there any conflicts or disagreements between them apart from their differing views on Juliet's age? Thoroughly exploring this aspect will add depth to your essay.

4. Consider rephrasing the last sentence to provide a clearer conclusion. This way, you can summarize your main points and bring your essay to a satisfying close.

Remember, while this feedback is intended to help you improve your writing, it is ultimately up to your teacher to formally grade your essay.