March 28, 2015

Homework Help: poem

Posted by john on Wednesday, April 22, 2009 at 9:02pm.

i fixed my narrative poem this time and i made it all rhyme. so can you check if its got sound this time? im sure it will be better than before. THANKS

The best of friends are john and fred
They understand even what is not said
they do homework together and never fight
but just hang out all day and night.

A girl named isabel is new at their school
she is funny and cool
she is sweet and cute
they both never fight or dispute.

soon they were competing for her heart
their friendship together went apart
running from each other and being mean
acting just like a regular teen.

this went on for a long time
until they saw her at lunch time
with a tall brown-haired boy
whom both despised for being a killjoy.

Soon they both saw how they've been bad
then they became really sad
it wasn't worth ruining their friendship
which taught then a valuable lesson on their whole trip.

They both were embarrassed for what they've done
none of it turned out fun
their friendship is very special
and destroying it was a loss.

They are tight friends again

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