What is the correct version in writing this sentence? The man is standing behind the woman and pulls on her short, blonde hair tilting her face up.
Modifiers and Parallel Structure - Writeacher, Saturday, April 18, 2009 at 3:51pm
The problem is with the placement of "tilting her face up." In the current sentence, it reads as if the blonde hair were tilting her face up -- which is clearly impossible!
Who was doing the tilting? Put that phrase as close as possible to that noun.
Modifiers and Parallel Structure - ROSE, Saturday, April 18, 2009 at 4:19pm
How would you recommend to write this sentence?
Modifiers and Parallel Structure - khireh, Wednesday, May 6, 2009 at 6:43pm
Modifiers and Parallel Structure - lisa, Thursday, July 19, 2012 at 4:15pm
When travelling at the speed of sound, the moon is approximately 320 hours