Posted by john on Friday, April 17, 2009 at 2:39pm.
I think your topic is neat; and I would only change one word in order to keep the poem balanced. You have begun each line with the "ing" form of the verb..... so I would start the 3rd line with "Making". Also use a period at the end.
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