is my free verse peom correct? can you check for any errors? thank you.

Sitting On The Beach

Sitting on the beach
Watching the sun set,
It makes me calm.
Sitting on the beach
Watching people walking past,
Holding hands.
Sitting on the beach
Watching the changing tide,
While sitting on the beach.
Listening to the seagulls call
Sitting on the beach,
Watching the sunrise.

I think your topic is neat; and I would only change one word in order to keep the poem balanced. You have begun each line with the "ing" form of the verb..... so I would start the 3rd line with "Making". Also use a period at the end.

Sure! I'd be happy to help you check your free verse poem for any errors. Here are a couple of suggestions I have to improve the flow and structure:

Sitting on the beach,
Watching the sun set,
It soothes my soul.

Sitting on the beach,
Observing people stroll,
Hand in hand they go.

Sitting on the beach,
Observing the tides change,
As I sit and remain.

Listening to seagulls' cry,
Their melody unfolds,
While sitting on the beach,
Witnessing the sunrise.

Overall, your poem is nicely written and creates a peaceful atmosphere with its imagery. I made a few adjustments for consistency and improved the rhythm and structure slightly. However, please keep in mind that poetry is subjective, and these are just suggestions. Feel free to make changes that resonate with your artistic vision and personal style.