Posted by Sam on Thursday, April 16, 2009 at 6:22pm.
friendship rust? Hmmmm.
last line:
Teach me to swing like Sam Sneed.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sam_Snead
In case you dont know.
You need to work on the rhythm and number of syllables in each line, in addition to the rhyme.
http://www.dltk-holidays.com/patrick/m-limerick.htm
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