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Posted by john on Tuesday, April 14, 2009 at 2:14pm.

can you please correct my personifitcation poem? please? for any mistakes?? thank you!


The Wild River


The river breaths heavily
It is fast and mean
The river is strong
And swallows all the leaves.



The river is a stealer
As it snatches the pebbles
Then gobbles them up
In their stomach, deeper, & deeper.

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