Posted by Kara on Saturday, April 11, 2009 at 3:58pm.
I'm doing a pro/con argumentative essay. Is this topic sentence argumentative?
The benefits of war and economics are better than global peace.
English - GuruBlue, Saturday, April 11, 2009 at 4:08pm
War and global peace... balance. Economics doesn't fit in there.
I would say the global benefits of war are better than those of peace.
English - Kara, Saturday, April 11, 2009 at 4:16pm
but the paragraph is going to be on the pros and cons of economics of war and global peace
English - Ms. Sue, Saturday, April 11, 2009 at 4:28pm
Perhaps your thesis sentence could be:
The global economic benefits of war are better than the economic benefits of peace.
The world benefits more economically from war than from peace.
War brings more global economic benefits than does peace.
English - Kyle Albert, Saturday, April 11, 2009 at 4:37pm
I agree with Ms. Sue, but its not clear whether you're talking about a specific country, because obviously the whole world wouldn't benefit from war, but some countries would.
English - SraJMcGin, Saturday, April 11, 2009 at 4:45pm
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If your thesis statement is bold (as in a debate) or controversial it will grab the reader's attention. Whether you select a "pro" or "con" stand, you must also present the opposite view, so you can "rebuttal" that.
So, take a stand and be ready to support it.
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