Posted by Kara on Thursday, April 9, 2009 at 8:50pm.
All people have their own perspectives of war as being ideological human activity.
All people have their own perspectives of war a being idelogical.
Which one of these is correct? If not how can i fix it. Thank You
English Sentence structure - Writeacher, Thursday, April 9, 2009 at 8:57pm
The adjective "ideological" needs to describe people -- because only people can have ideas. War cannot have ideas!!
Try breaking it into two sentences and being very straightforward about what you're trying to say. Then re-post.
English Sentence structure - Kara, Thursday, April 9, 2009 at 9:14pm
All people have their own perspectives about ideological human activity related to war.
English Sentence structure - Writeacher, Thursday, April 9, 2009 at 9:15pm
"Human activity" is not people or a person.
All people have their own ideologies about war.
All people have their own perspectives about the reasons for war.
English Sentence structure - bobpursley, Thursday, April 9, 2009 at 9:19pm
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English Sentence structure - Writeacher, Thursday, April 9, 2009 at 9:22pm
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