Posted by John on Wednesday, April 8, 2009 at 5:08pm.
1. Fine
2. Correct the spelling of "gardening" -- otherwise, it's fine.
3. Change "cookeries" to "recipes" and it'll be fine.
4. The animation program is very fun because we can smile all the time.
~~>Does your ability to smile cause the animation program to be fun? I don't think so!! Also, "very fun" is not correct. Here's a re-written version for you: We smile all the time because the animation program is fun.
5. Fine
6. Rephrased: The sitcom is very interesting and makes us laugh when we watch it.
7. Fine
8. Fine; "talk show" is two words, though.
9. Fine
10. Fine
11. Fine except that it should be "language" not "languages."
12. Fine
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