Posted by Mike on Monday, April 6, 2009 at 3:58pm.
Sentence 1 has a correct use of the semicolon -- it separates two independent clauses.
Sentence 2 also has a semicolon separating two independent clauses, so the semicolon use is fine. There are two other errors, though. Delete the comma after the book's title, and change the verb "would be" to "is." You're not writing about possibilities; you're writing about what is, right?
That's correct. Thanks for your help.
You're welcome!
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