English grammar check please
posted by Mike on .
If someone could check these sentences for me that would be great.
sentence beginning with a present participle:
Beginning with Tom's conviction, Jem's belief in justice and the basic good of humanity is badly damaged.
sentence that begins with a past participle:
Brught to an understanding about Atticus's lessons, Scout finally sees Boo Radley as a full human being by the end of the story.
sentence beginning with an adverb:
Quickly, it is shown that the father of characters Scout and Jem is a morally good person who wants very much to do the right thing, the moral thing, as an example to the children.
Thanks very much.
They all look fine to me.
I'd change a little wording in that last one, though -- get rid of the wordiness: Instead of "... it is shown that the father of characters Scout and Jem ... " try this:
... Scout and Jem's father demonstrates ...
I wonder about the word "Quickly" though -- do you mean early in the story?
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