Although, the first admendment protects freedom of speech in many ways, the boundaries are so complex.
Please Help is this a good thesis statement?
Research Writing - Writeacher, Thursday, April 2, 2009 at 5:12pm
I'd change the word "so" to "quite" -- the rest sounds fine.
This means that your entire paper will be devoted to proving there are complexities involving the first amendment beyond the literal wording, right?
Research Writing - Writeacher, Thursday, April 2, 2009 at 5:13pm
You need to delete that comma after "Although"!