Posted by jouan on Monday, March 30, 2009 at 9:37am.
There once was a boy named Timmy.
His brothers were all named Jimmy.
They all got confused.
This name<~~which name? was misused.
They all ganged up and beat Timmy.
The meter and rhyme are fine.
DO I have to change it
You need to make it clear if "This name" refers to Timmy or Jimmy!!
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