Can someone check this for me please.
Report these spoken remarks to a freind, making the necessary changes.
1. I live it
a. she....said that she loves it.
2. I am leaving in half an hour.
a. He said that he's leaving in half an hour.
3. The rain has stopped.
a. You.. said the rain has stoped.
4. He said Iv'e been playing it for 2 hours.
a. He said he has been playing it for 2 hours.
5. I had breakfast earlier.
a. She said ate breakfast earlier?
a. She said she had eaten breakfas earlier?
6. Where you living in London in 96
a. She asked if you were living in London in 96.
7. I have bought three pizzas
a. He has bought 3 pizzas.
8. I'd been waiting for 30 minutes.
a. You said you had been waiting for 30 minutes.
9. We'll be in Bangkok in July.
a. They will be in Bangkok in July.
10. Will you be coming back.
a. She asked if you will be coming back.
#1 = ??
#3a - no periods after "You" and watch the spelling of "stopped."
#4 - watch spelling of "I've"
#5a - Where's the subject for "ate"?
Second #5a - watch spelling
#6 and 6a - When referring to a date with the first two digits missing, use an apostrophe (1996 = '96).
#7a - He said....??
The rest look fine.
*friend
To check if the original sentences and their revisions are correct, we can compare them and identify any necessary changes. Here's an analysis of each sentence:
1. Original: "I live it"
Revised: "She said that she loves it."
The revision is correct. The original sentence has been changed into reported speech correctly, with the necessary pronoun and verb changes.
2. Original: "I am leaving in half an hour."
Revised: "He said that he's leaving in half an hour."
The revision is correct. The original sentence has been changed into reported speech correctly, maintaining the verb tense and pronoun change.
3. Original: "The rain has stopped."
Revised: "You said the rain has stopped."
The revision is incorrect. The pronoun should be changed from "you" to "she" to match the reported speech format.
4. Original: "He said I've been playing it for 2 hours."
Revised: "He said he has been playing it for 2 hours."
The revision is correct. The original sentence has been changed into reported speech correctly, with the necessary pronoun and verb changes.
5. Original: "I had breakfast earlier."
Revised options:
a. "She said ate breakfast earlier?"
b. "She said she had eaten breakfast earlier?"
Both revised options are incorrect. The correct revision should be: "She said she had eaten breakfast earlier." The past tense "had" is necessary to accurately report the sentence.
6. Original: "Where you living in London in '96?"
Revised: "She asked if you were living in London in '96."
The revision is correct. The original question has been changed into reported speech correctly, with the necessary pronoun and verb changes.
7. Original: "I have bought three pizzas."
Revised: "He has bought 3 pizzas."
The revision is correct. The original sentence has been changed into reported speech correctly, maintaining the verb tense and pronoun change.
8. Original: "I'd been waiting for 30 minutes."
Revised: "You said you had been waiting for 30 minutes."
The revision is correct. The original sentence has been changed into reported speech correctly, with the necessary pronoun and verb changes.
9. Original: "We'll be in Bangkok in July."
Revised: "They will be in Bangkok in July."
The revision is correct. The original sentence has been changed into reported speech correctly, maintaining the verb tense and pronoun change.
10. Original: "Will you be coming back?"
Revised: "She asked if you will be coming back."
The revision is correct. The original question has been changed into reported speech correctly, with the necessary pronoun and verb changes.