Homework Help: Spanish

Posted by Larry on Thursday, March 12, 2009 at 2:44am.

This is a letter I had to write in Spanish/. Can someone please check my work?

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Hola
Me llamo Larry y tengo catorce anos. Soy de Kelowna/. En Kelowna hace frío pero también hace sol/. Soy alto pero no soy grande. Soy inteligente, trabajador y simpatico/. No soy atlético o artistic/. Me gusta usar la computadora, alquilar un DVD, leer un libro y descansar/. Tengo que ir a la escuela, hacer la tarea y estudiar/. Me gusta comer pizza, papas fritas y beber refrescos/. No me gusta comer frutas/, helado or beber agua/. Tengo la clase de español/. Es un poco difícil/. También tengo la clase de historia/. Es divertido y fácil/. Yo tengo llegar a la escuela a las ocho y media de la mañana/. Tengo la escuela lunes a viernes/. Mi escuela es grande/. Hay un gimnasio, una cafetería y una biblioteca/. La biblioteca tiene muchos libros/. Está cerca de la oficina/. La cafetería esta legos del gimnasio/. Mi amigo Edward es inteligente y tiene pelo rubio/. Mi otro amigo James es comico y tiene pelo castaño/.
Adiós

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Is there anything wrong with the letter? Does it make sense?
If something is not right, please let me know so I can fix it/.

Muchas Gracias!

PS. Don't mind the forward slahes. For someone reason it keeps saying my question could not be posted because I'm not allowed to post internet addresses. But I have none!!

Spanish - SraJMcGin, Thursday, March 12, 2009 at 10:28am
Don't forget the tilde on "años." Also, be sure to delete all the (slashes) /'s, as in "/." Also, an accent on "simpático."

One grammar and one spelling problem in "No soy atlético o artistic/. " = No soy atlético ni artístico. In an affirmative it is "o" = "or" but in a negative statement it is "ni" = "nor."

Here is English interference = "helado or beber" = ni

"Yo tengo llegar " = this is a 3-part idiiom = tener + que + infinitive

(spelling error) = "legos" = lejos

Another accent on "cómico" and if you'd like the Spanish names = Eduardo y Jaime

Sra

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