Correct these sentences, if necessary!
2) Tommy Boy acted like a child and was treated like a child.
4) Tommy Callahan was a simple guy and nothing seemed to go his way
6)The movie is about Tommy Boy a college graduate that has to run the family business after his father passes away.
8) The difference between Tommy Boy and Sammy was Tommy Boy had a happy ending.
10) In the movie Tommy Boy and the short story A&P the characters are not expected to become heroes.
12) Both Tommy Boy and Sammy become heroes but the differences between their acts of heroism are that Tommy had a goal with a happy ending while Sammy was just following his morals.
14) A hero is usually humble, caring and selfless.
16) In the movie Tommy Boy, many of his friends have high hopes for him even though he appears to be dimwitted.
18) Both Tommy Boy and Michelle had to rely on one another. While Tommy relied on Michelle to run the office, Michelle expected Tommy Boy to be successful on the road.
20) Following in his father’s footsteps Tommy Boy found his calling as a sales person while building relationships with his employees.
22) Tommy Boy was very fair and treated everyone with love and respect.
24) During the sales trip Tommy shows his love and compassion when Richard hits a deer.
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2) Tommy Boy acted like a child and was treated as such.
To correct this sentence, you can change "like a child" to "as a child" to match the verb "treated." The corrected sentence would be: "Tommy Boy acted as a child and was treated as a child."
4) Tommy Callahan was a simple guy, and nothing seemed to go his way.
This sentence is already correctly written.
6) The movie is about Tommy Boy, a college graduate who has to run the family business after his father passes away.
To correct this sentence, you can add a comma after "Tommy Boy" to separate the introductory phrase. Additionally, it's better to use "who" instead of "that" when referring to a person. The corrected sentence would be: "The movie is about Tommy Boy, a college graduate who has to run the family business after his father passes away."
8) The difference between Tommy Boy and Sammy was Tommy Boy had a happy ending.
To correct this sentence, you can change "was" to "is" to match the present tense verb "had." The corrected sentence would be: "The difference between Tommy Boy and Sammy is Tommy Boy had a happy ending."
10) In the movie Tommy Boy and the short story A&P, the characters are not expected to become heroes.
This sentence is already correctly written.
12) Both Tommy Boy and Sammy become heroes, but the difference between their acts of heroism is that Tommy had a goal with a happy ending while Sammy was just following his morals.
This sentence is already correctly written.
14) A hero is usually humble, caring, and selfless.
This sentence is already correctly written.
16) In the movie Tommy Boy, many of his friends have high hopes for him, even though he appears to be dimwitted.
To correct this sentence, you can add a comma after "him" to separate the dependent clause. The corrected sentence would be: "In the movie Tommy Boy, many of his friends have high hopes for him, even though he appears to be dimwitted."
18) Both Tommy Boy and Michelle had to rely on each other. While Tommy relied on Michelle to run the office, Michelle expected Tommy Boy to be successful on the road.
This sentence is already correctly written.
20) Following in his father's footsteps, Tommy Boy found his calling as a salesperson while building relationships with his employees.
To correct this sentence, you can add a comma after "footsteps" to separate the introductory phrase. The corrected sentence would be: "Following in his father's footsteps, Tommy Boy found his calling as a salesperson while building relationships with his employees."
22) Tommy Boy was very fair and treated everyone with love and respect.
This sentence is already correctly written.
24) During the sales trip, Tommy shows his love and compassion when Richard hits a deer.
To correct this sentence, you can add a comma after "trip" to separate the introductory phrase. The corrected sentence would be: "During the sales trip, Tommy shows his love and compassion when Richard hits a deer."