Posted by Michele on .
Can you read my conclusion for me. He said that it only had to be a couple sentences long. The restatement of thesis, last strong point about what were arguing, and an exit sentence. Do you think that this is good or have any ideas on what I should add? How's the grammar?
Therapeutic cloning is clearly an ethical and effective way to treat some life-threatening diseases. This type of cloning may have the potential to ease human suffering and save millions of lives. Hopefully, society will see the light at the end of the tunnel and believe that therapeutic cloning can possibly be a life saver for many in the future.
Your conclusion is good. :-)
One suggestion, though. "will seee the light at the end of the tunnel" is trite and could be replaced with a different phrase.
will come to understand and support therapeutic cloning.